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Maybe a contrast black and white in Ps or flash lighting for the next shoot, more space at left, and removes the street name. Greetings.

1/500 5.6?
i’d say 1/1500 and 2.8.5 would be better.

and to expose darker, expose for highlights, process for shadows,
i find with digi it’s easier to get detail out of dark shadow than blown highlights